I opened my eyes and still could not see anything. There was no blood on my back. My clothes were intact. I was still on the same road. Walking ahead. Robotic, automated steps. My body seemed unharmed. As if nothing had happened. Yet I could feel the pain of the bite and the rough claws grasping at my flesh. Again and again, stabbing at my back, echoing the aggression I had just undergone. I could not be imagining such vivid pain. I had never felt anything like that before.


7 Comments Add yours

  1. moonskittles says:

    This is so vivid, it made my breath and heartbeats fasten.. wow!!

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  2. Thank you Dajena 🙂 ❤ I am glad it grasped your attention! It was the intended effect. Your comment makes me very happy!


  3. Frightening and so well done!

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    1. Thank you D. ❤ I am so happy you think so ❤

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  4. The picture tbat you left me with is so vivid

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    1. Thank you M. That’s fantastic!

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