Our friendship is gone.
We used to be partners
In everything – laughs, tough times,
Fights and petty crimes.
I remember, that one time,
When we attached a string of cans
To the tail of your neighbor’s cat.
We filmed it, and we laughed our bellies out.
I watched the feed again, the other day.
My laughter missed your echo.
I miss you mate, I wish
You and I had fallen for a different girl.
Click here to read the beginning and the end of this story.
This is an except of a poetic short story entitled Instead of You and posted on Mug’s Tale as part of the 18th Weekly Writing Workshop exploring the theme “Forgive Me!”
Featured image: “Under Heavy Skies” – Picture captured in Evian Les Bains on November 14th, 2014.
Wow. That’s all I can say
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Awesome. That transition from filming the cat to missing the echo is great 🙂
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Thank you for pointing out your favorite part, Fionn 🙂 I am glad you enjoyed it!
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PS: Thank you so much for following the link and reading the whole text. Your feedback is much appreciated. 🙂
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