I am standing in the doorway
Sheltered from the down pouring rain
Under the porch canopy
Looking out into the street.
I know that somewhere
Night is settling in pelts of red and orange
But over me the skies are all grey matter –
Thick cotton clouds are all I can see.
***
It is a warm day of summer
My skin is moist from the heavy heat.
My clothes feel uncomfortably tight –
Second skin plasters hastily applied
To hide my reality
Wrinkled and tensed
Straps of cloth damp enough to soak
Through my organic outer layer.
***
There is a woody scent in the air.
Muddy soil and drenched asphalt
Hinting through – I breathe it in
I offer my hand to the weeping skies
The fresh drops are flirting with me
Sharp tears hitting and splashing
Exquisitely gliding on my shell
Leaving no trace on my relieved flesh.
Picture captured in Geneva, Switzerland in 2015, with my iPhone 5C – panorama – black and white.
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Thank you, M. 🙂 I appreciate it 🙂
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Brilliant. A really sensory poem story with things like drenched asphalt, loads of great images and lines, very easy to feel as if I was there in Geneva (once again)
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Thank you Mister Lion ❤ Your comment warms my heart! It is my pleasure to take you around places I love 🙂
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This is beautiful. I love the mood and sensory soaking. Well done.
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Diane! How are you? Your comment brought a giant smile to my face. Thank you ❤ for reading and leaving such a kind appreciation. I am hugely happy you enjoyed it 🙂
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My pleasure! Stunning poetry ❤
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Aw ❤ Thank you! ❤
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I love the mood. I could almost smell the rainy scent. There is something sensual in your poetry 🙂
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*smiling* Thank you, N. Words and nature are my only lovers at the moment, so what can I say, I give in to them with all I have. 🙂
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The last lines instill such vivacity in the entire poem. As if the ‘you’ in the piece just underwent a soul cleanse. You’ve created such vivid images B, the grey matter cloud laden skies – wonderful writing! And that earthy, musky aroma lingering throughout the piece, so intoxicating! Well done Sparkle. 🙂
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*smiling from ear to ear* Thank you my bubble for your lovely words. Your perception of my piece makes it sounds amazing ❤ Thank you ❤
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Enchanting …..beautiful, I loved it right from the scratch 🙂
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*smiling* Thank you! I am glad you did 🙂
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