My Shadow and I
Striding alongside – asphalt
Bound – sigh, and leap on.
This is my first attempt at writing haiku. I would love to know what you think of it.
I would also very much enjoy reading some of your haiku poetry. Feel free to share your thoughts and words in the comment section below.
Love, ❤
Hailie.
What Is an Haiku?
- Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry.
- When modelled in English, a haiku is formed of 3 lines adding up to a total count of 17 syllables. (5-7-5)
- It supposed to be simple, intense, and direct.
- A Haiku is composed of:
- 2 elements drawn from every day life (images/ideas/objects) and exposed side by side,
- and a cutting word – usually a verbal element – which links the former items together. This “kireji” (=cutting word) sets their relation to one another and exposes the context of their reunion.
Well done, Hailie
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Thank you, Michael 🙂 I am delighted you liked it 🙂
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Haiku is a great way to work on being succinct with poetry and thought in my opinion. Very profound things arise from its simplicity. Let me know if you would like to know some haiku blogs to read.
Michael
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Thank you so much, Michael. Indeed I would love to read some haiku blogs 🙂
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https://amaviedecoeurentier.wordpress.com/haiku-hub/
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Since I like walking I thought this was perfect!
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Thank you, Gina ❤ We are two birds of a feather as well it seems then 😉
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https://wandererhaiku.wordpress.com
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I follow Lize Bard already, she is amazing!
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Haiku Hub has a number of members listed who you may like. Ronovan Writes does Haiku challenges every Monday too. Have a great day!
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Thank you for pointing me in the right direction! I appreciate it 🙂 Have a fantastic day, Michael. It was nice catching up with your poetry 🙂
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Marvelous post
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Thank you, M. 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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Always l. How are you this amazing day?
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I am great, thank you for asking 🙂 how about you?
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I am doing phenomenal. Thank you so much for asking. Now, I want you remember to smile cause you matter
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I am happy to hear you are doing that well 🙂 Stay happy! 😃
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With friends like you is hard not too. Send you lots of love.
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*smiling* that makes me very glad 🙂
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😄❤
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Much love back 🙂
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Nice one, good attempt. Reminds me to go running tomorrow 😃
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Thanks, Mister Lion 🙂 haha, yeah, so do I 🙂
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