Breaking Point

She sighed at the sight of him. He tried to grab her hand. She dodged his attempt and pulled away. He had betrayed her.

She never asked him to be perfect. Not even kind. All she wanted from him was honesty. Knowing he would never lie to her face.

Even that he could not hold up to. He had lied – over the stupidest thing too. She could not begin to understand why. When she had asked…

Not only had he sunk further into his tangled web of fibs, he had accused her of doing the same. How did he dare pin it back on her? – Dumbstruck.

She stood there for a moment. A few feet away. She could still hear his voice spinning more lies to try and fix his mess. She could feel the pain in his voice…

…Read the despair in his eyes. The disappointment in hers spoke louder than words. She had trusted him. She did not anymore. There was no way back from that.

This is the beginning of Roller-Coaster – a text I wrote answering The 23rd Weekly Writing Workshop. It is published on Mug’s Tale.

Click here if you want to read the rest of it. 

Much love to you all ❤



Picture captured in Toulouse, Jardin des Plantes, France, with an iPhone 5C, HDR settings.


4 Comments Add yours

  1. Singledust says:

    they spin and dig deeper and soon cant haul themselves out…i totally get this

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    1. Thank you for reading, Gina 🙂 Yes that was the idea! I am glad it could speak to you 🙂

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  2. Hello my dear! I think we’re connected to each other my sweetie, I wrote a few weeks ago a text which I decided to post today… and I discover yours now….please have a read, you’ll understand! Lots of kisses 😘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Hey my sweetie ❤ I will have a read right away. Although I don't need to read it to know we are connected. You are a rainbow at stormy times, and a dazzling sunshine when it is all quiet in my life ❤ Lots of kisses to you too ❤


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