Fallen Tear

Vivid lights, soul magic breaks out,

floods the world with a single tear.

 

Eyes closed tight,

she wished the world away.

A single drop

parted from her eye…

 

Stolen flower

torn from her stem

landing on a river.

 

Fallen feather

floating away

transported

out of the way

 

At the mercy

of the slightest breeze

A breath…

 

Brightest dreams and darkest days

tethered to her brimming consciousness,

about to burst in a sparkling storm.

 

Vivid lights,

soul magic breaks out,

floods the world

with a single tear.

 


 

Hey my lovely friends, and beautiful artists out there,

 

Here is another song from me. I wrote the lyrics first and then totally improvised, the tune, the rhythm and the chords.

I look forward to reading your comments ❤

 

Love to you all,

Always

 © Hailie


Featured image: Thonon by night, Port Ripaille and its lights on a foggy night, captured with an iPhone 5S, HDR settings.

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20 Comments Add yours

    1. Thank you! That means the world to me! Did you listen to the song?

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        1. That warms my heart! Thank you for letting me know! I am very grateful ❤️

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  1. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

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    1. Thank you so much, Kayla! I am so stoked you enjoyed it!! Hugs to you!

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  2. ivor20 says:

    Beautifully poetic Hailie,
    “floods the world
    with a single tear.”
    Such a dramatic line, and your song was glorious, and your voice sweetly clearer, well done.xx

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    1. Thank you my Ivor! I try to follow your advice and better myself with each composition 😉 I am so very happy you liked it! ❤️ xx

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  3. Yet another beautiful song 🙂. The song seems to just flow out of you from one section to the next, it’s all so naturally you. So many wonderful sections to it. You got the intro spot on, your voice carried through that long “flower” just perfectly. The outro is just 😍, I can’t process words to describe it. And of course your words are as magical as ever. I can’t help singing “Eyes closed tight, / She wished the world away.” I try to speak the lines but they just come out as song everytime. They’re just too lyrical. Not complaining of course 😄.
    That’s enough fanboying from me 😅. I know you’re enjoying your songwriting, and I’m loving it too. I can’t wait to see what you produce next. I’m sure you’ll find a way to impress even more 💕.

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    1. Aw! My Irish number 1 friend and fan! Your words are music to my creative soul. What a challenge it always is to keep impressing you! 😉

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      1. Finally, a moment to myself, and a chance to fill my world with music again 🙂. My words are music? Yep, you really do know how to make my heart leap ☺. Your beautiful creative soul deserves all my praise and more, and I hope it never tires 💕. You make it seem so natural and easy, it doesn’t seem like too much of a challenge so far 😊.

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  4. Diana says:

    The words, the music and the image conspire in a way to create a sullen mood that lingers. In other words, your creativity allows the listener to stop all distractions, enter your world and be moved. Lovely, impressionable work my dear friend ❤

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    1. Oh my D! So happy you enjoyed it! I am so happy my words can reach out to your heart and move you. Thank you for being there, always 😘

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  5. Damn!
    So good.

    The image of a single tear flooding the world is brilliant and reeled me in.

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    1. Thank you, Mister Lion! I am delighted to hear you enjoyed that!
      Did you listen to the song too?

      By the way, it is so nice to hear from you. You had disappeared, but you have been back I see! Thanks for popping by, I hope life is treating you beautifully.

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      1. All good 🙂 Blog fell by the wayside for a little bit but kept writing, it’s tough not too 🙂

        Song playing now.

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  6. Hailie, wow, just wow. You always leave me without words, always.

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  7. Nitin says:

    This is very good songwriting. It’s poetic, and I loved the singing too. It reminded me of another cover you’ll give justice to. A folk one this time. I’ll leave the link if you let me. I don’t want to flood your comment section with links! It’s called Dust to Dust by The Civil Wars.

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